!00 word challenge going on their website!!
I put in a lot of effort for a story about Alcatraz in less than 100 words. I hope you like it. Scroll down to read it.
I was Badwill, only badwill. The word that stayed in my head was badwill. If I had not Murdered a shopman I would not be badwill.
The sink leaked heavily, the bed was rock hard and there were bed bugs irritating my skin. The shelf was about to fall and my pocket knife is still hidden in my pocket.
The Cell door creaking open to reveal a guard for inspection. It was my chance. I took it carefully with my knife.
Finally fresh air but I knew I was under CCTV, but there was nothing I could do about it
Very clever writing. You have told a whole story in just 100 words. The way you tell your escape in just 7 words is powerful... " I took it carefully with my knife." It makes the reader use their inferencing skills.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was a very good sentence as well. By the way thanks!
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