Wednesday 22 June 2016

100 word challenge

Hello,
This is my writing with words under 100. Please have a look below:


The whistle blew like thunder making me snatch any clues and run for it.
“Stop right there you stinky brat”, shouted the policeman from behind making me nervous like a mouse from a cat.
I did not stop, remembering about last time I listened to the cops.

I realised that maybe I should have listened this time to the stupid policeman.
I tripped horribly on my shoelace that could have killed me and went flying down the deep, dark bank. I brought out my tiny 4 year old torch covered in sticky webs and shone the old light of mine to find the secrets of the past. The best day ever.

1 comment:

  1. I lved the first half but didn't understand the ending.

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